Schedule a meeting with me if you would like to talk about your revision.

The main difference between this and the first literature review is that 30 points are allocated to how well you responded to concerns raised by the person who graded your paper. You do not need to make every change recommended by your peer reviewers. Schedule a meeting with me if you would like to talk about your revision.
I’ve attached my original paper, the corrections I got back from my professor, and the corrections my peer reviewer gave me.
I need help making these corrections and only use the sources at the bottom of the paper to cite stuff. I will also mention that we aren’t allowed to have direct quotes in the paper only citations.