edit this essay with the following feedback- Good points throughout: 1. solid us

edit this essay with the following feedback-
Good points throughout:
1. solid use of sources
2. limited summaries
3. good analysis
4. needed more case studies
5. good APA format and style
6. might consider an Abstract page
7. keep all headers about the same length
8. actual quote use
9. paragraphs too long (3-5 sentences each is needed)
10. a little on the short side here. recall, 5 pages of complete text.
Overall, an admirable atttempt here though fix the above mentions for/toward your final draft submission this week.