Describe what you did well in your draft. What made it so strong, and how will y

Describe what you did well in your draft. What made it so strong, and how will you use these strengths in other draft sections that may need additional work?
State which sections of your draft need further improvement. Why do you feel these sections need to be revised? Which peer or instructor feedback will you use during the revision process
Will be using feedback from instructor thats attached