This is my personal statement for applying to PA school. English is my second la

This is my personal statement for applying to PA school. English is my second laguage, so I want it proofreading and also making sure the grammer is right (rewriting if it’s needed). The first part of the essay needs to be crteative and in a story telling style. The socond part should be about experiences/skills and why I want to be a PA. Last part of the essay should be about why I would be a great canditate and then of course I need a strong closing.
Thnak you!