A report of research (Marar et al., 2012) was provided in the readings for this

A report of research (Marar et al., 2012) was provided in the readings for this week. In this discussion question, critique the article using Lang’s guidelines from chapter 2 regarding the qualities of effective writing. Include in your critique a discussion whether the authors’ attended to the subject and reader and state why or why not. In addition, critique the authors’ writing style, considering the word choice, sentence structure, paragraph organization and overall presentation of information.
Lang, T. A. (2009). How to write, publish, and present in the Health Sciences: A guide for physicians and laboratory researchers. Philadelphia, PA: ACP.